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The Ruins - Part IThe Ruins - Poems of Loss
by William Bethea

Part I

Once, when I went to the Darkness;
I left behind my precious things.
When I arrived at Its door,
There was no answer.
Upon returning home,
I found It waiting. The Darkness
Held my precious secrets in its teeth,
Ground them into dust and spit them
In my face, laughing.

Once, there was no where to turn.
The Darkness pretended to be my friend.
It welcomed me into Its lair.
As It fed me, nurtured me,
Comforted me, loved me,
It siphoned away my soul.
As I wept in utter delusion,
The Darkness consoled my broken heart,
Smothered my face into Its bosom,
Offered Its orifices to slake my misery,
Suc

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Oil on bristol paper (14" x 17", 2012).
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~Cr2O3 Jan 12, 2013
sad title

love the contrast there

if you want critique:
maybe the color patterns are too repetative
it might change to the upper end

:)
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*Will-Being-Mind Jan 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yes, I agree. It needs depth. But, someone framed it and put it their bedroom, so I am not going to touch it.
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~Cr2O3 Mar 9, 2013
wait..
why????
i mean
you could allways break into that bathroom
in the middle of night
and paint it further
cant you??!!!!!?!!
i mean
for the ART!!

;)
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Mood: Humor *Will-Being-Mind Mar 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
LOL!
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~Cr2O3 Mar 10, 2013
:iconyellowheartplz:
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